Traveling in a group assisted by a tour guide is the best way to travel. How much do you agree or disagree with this assertion?

The traveling with group are nowadays are common ln my opinion I have more main reason,

firstly

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to be save money with limited time to pay think because all nessory available by the company of travel tour,secondaly ,the reason to travel with group to improve communication with other member and learn new languages,on my opinion I strongly agree to visitor other contury with some deferent people to increase my comuncaion skills,in occlusion

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kind of services are nowadays are more interested and effect to have nice travel

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Jan 23, 2026

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planning

Plan your work. Start with a line to show your view. Then add 2-3 main reasons. End with a short wrap up.

structure

Use clear paragraphs. Put one idea in each paragraph. Use words like 'first', 'also', 'but', 'in addition', 'finally' to link ideas.

language

Use simple and clear words. Check spelling. Use short and easy sentences.

stance

The writer shows a clear view in favor of group travel.

content

There are ideas about saving money and learning language.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

86 words

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Traveling in a group assisted by a tour guide is the best way to travel. How much do you agree or disagree with this assertion?

Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Government should spend money on railways rather than road

Some information in films, books and on the Internet has a negative influence on young people. Some people think that such information should be controlled. Give your opinion on both sides of view use your own experience and example.

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?