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improves our relationship and will be strong .
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the relationship strong .
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caused harm. It is
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our
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humanity has reached today. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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structure
Make a plain idea plan before you write. Say your view in a short line in the first par and end with the same idea.
language
Use short, clear sentences. Check for grammar and spelling before you finish.
content
Give real, simple examples that fit life to prove a point.
coherence
Use linking words to show flow, like but, also, and, in addition.
content
The essay tries to show both sides and give a view.
organization
There is a try to use an intro and an end.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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