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Band 2.5

Scientists say that in the future, humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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 will communicate in
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language
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language,
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this
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 is the saying of some
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scientific endeavours. I believe
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 is a negative development and I will discuss
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 the following paragraphs. On the
one
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 hand, there are many benefits of using
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a single
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language
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. It
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expands not only the
proffessional
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professional
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also
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 educational
opporunities
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opportunities
. Because
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 nobody will
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be bound
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to
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by
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language
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a language
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 barrier and can work and study in any part of
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the world
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 without the need of learning
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a new
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language
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, when
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I traveled
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traveled
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travelled
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 to
Japan
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Japan,
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 I
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faced
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 many
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challenges
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 communicating with local people because nobody
speak
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speaks
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 and
understand
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understands
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english
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English
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 there.
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, if people start to speak in
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language
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 it might
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 to cultural
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. Because
language
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 is a core element
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 in keeping a tradition alive. First of all, all the ancient manuscripts are written in
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their
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 original
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. So, if
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disapear
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disappears
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a lose
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lose
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 of information in those manuscripts.
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, we cannot explain certain
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dialects
 of a
langauge
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language
 in
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language
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. In
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 there are words which have no meaning but
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are used
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 in communication as
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a medium
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 of conveying
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feelings
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 or thoughts. In conclusion,
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 there are some pros of having
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 common
language
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 in the world
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, but
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that
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will cost us
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a lose
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lose
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loss
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 of cultural, traditional, and historical values, which is not good
overall
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 for all different civilisations.

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task response
Make a short clear intro that states your view and what you will talk about.
ideas
Explain each idea well and add a clear example for each point.
coherence
Use linking words to show how your thoughts go from one point to the next.
conclusion
Finish with a short strong conclusion that restates your view.
structure
The writer gives a view and tries to discuss both sides.
organization
There is a clear plan for the essay with three paragraphs.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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