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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

It is true that leisure travel has made the
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 the most popular worldwide. Some folks are of the opinion that
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 trend would result in
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 emerging as the sole
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 of communication worldwide. Here are some pros and cons
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 possible new development. The main advantage is, creation of unity amongst nations.
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 would lead to more bilateral government agreements, more
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 revenue, migrations and marriages. One possible drawback
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 is the extinction of other languages, cultures and traditions.
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 would lead to a loss of human population variety as there would be a decrease in the transfer of
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 and cultures across generations. In summary, leisure travelling has made the
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 popular. If the
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 becomes the world's lingua Franka, there would be increased bilateral government agreement, revenue,
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and migrations.
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 and the gradual loss of indigenous cultures as well.

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structure
Use a clear view point at the start and keep one main idea in each paragraph.
language
Fix grammar and spell off words like travel, travelling, and lingua franca.
content
Give one easy example to back each point.
conclusion
End with a short clear end that restates the main idea.
task
The essay shows the topic and gives both sides.
coherence
There is a short summary at the end.
analysis
Some ideas show how one language may affect nations.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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