The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

This
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is a process chart illustrating the steps involved in the production of olive
oil
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. It is a seven-step process which begins with the picking of
olives
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and ends with the storage and sale of the extracted
oil
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. The process
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requires the use of an array of equipment. It begins with the harvesting of
olives
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. The harvested
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are thoroughly rinsed in cold water, which is done using a large industrial funnel attached to a conveyor belt. The belt facilitates the movement of rinsed
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into a smasher. The
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are smashed into olive paste and olive stones. Afterwards, they are transferred into a perforated bag which is passed through a presser, which squeezes the bags to extract any fluid present. After the pressing stage, the extrudate is heated up , which leads to separation into its water and
oil
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components. The water is discarded
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the
oil
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advances to the
last
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stage of storing and selling.

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