Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/her to a party at your home and include the following: what the party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accommodate him/her Start with Dear

Dear Sarah, How are you doing? It has certainly been a long time since we

last

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heard from each other. How is your husband and work? I am throwing a party to celebrate my 31st birthday on the 24th of February, and I would love you to be in attendance. We moved to the next street from where we lived previously. So, once you arrive at the town hall, take the first right turn,

drive

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and drive

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down the road.

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take the first left turn. Stop at the

red roofed

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red-roofed

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Catholic Church on the left side. My house is the tall white painted building opposite the Catholic Church.

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, there is a mechanic workshop down my street for

landmark

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the landmark

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, we have a nice parking space for guests, just outside my house. I have ordered some exquisite Nigerian cuisine for that day.

Infact

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In fact

would

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it would

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be jollof rice, fried chicken, lots of pastries and drinks. We have 2 spare rooms downstairs, so feel free to pack for an extra

day

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day's

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stay.

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, your husband is invited.

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, I am happy to answer any question you may have, and you are

welcomed

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welcome

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to send me a text anytime. I would

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apply

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be thrilled to have you at my party. See you soon! Your friend, Ginika.

ginauzoekwe995

Jan 26, 2026

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structure

Some lines are clear and the plan is shown. Make the text split into short parts to show a clear flow.

vocabulary

Use short, easy words. A few big words can come, but keep most words in easy form.

grammar

Fix small grammar points: 'Infact' should be 'In fact'; 'be be' should be 'be'; spell numbers with digits or as words like 'two'.

content

The invite shows a clear plan for the party and why it is held.

tone

The tone stays warm and kind, with a nice closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

212 words

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