Some people believe that studying History is very important. Others say that it is irrelevant and has many limitations and should not be studied at all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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believe that learning

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is an essential issue,

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others consider that it is inconsequential and with numerous limitations and should be ignored

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all. In my opinion, I

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disagree with the second argument. Meanwhile,

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essay, I will provide my own viewpoint and the

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for both stances. In my own stance,

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is a vital measure to provide

people

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not simply to

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what

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happened

in the former periods. Most

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is it provides

people

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outstanding

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material

to prevent the mistakes that

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occurred

in the past.

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world war

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II made

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countless casualties and

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apart

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tons of families. To avoid the tragedies

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the united

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united

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nation

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founded in order to replace

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warfare

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peaceful negotiation for all member nations.

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case, I believe it is

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obvious evidence to prove that

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a lesson

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miserable conflicts and

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the next tragedy. It

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support

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my viewpoint that

history

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should not be

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as an

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irrelevant

issue with diverse

limitation

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and should be abandoned.

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History

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that

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worthless to learn

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various limitations and irrelevant. It is undeniable that some historical experiences were difficult to

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into the accuracy

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vanished information. Meanwhile, some former lessons may

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unable

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utilized

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modern

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era.

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, for

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who were

history

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advocacy

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, they considered

history

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fertilizer

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that not

simply

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knowledges

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people

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a textbook which

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diverse

experience

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make

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people

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self-reflect

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and avoid

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mistakes. In conclusion, despite some opinions

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holds

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the reverse stance to

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, we simply cannot ignore the contribution made by

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that

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people

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to establish

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better future.

junhonggiu

Jan 27, 2026

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planning

Plan the essay. Write a short plan first: intro, view 1, view 2, your view, and a short end.

structure

Use a clear thesis in the intro. Say your view in one line.

paragraphing

Make each paragraph have one idea. Start with a topic sentence.

grammar

Use simple, direct words. Check form of verbs and nouns.

cohesion

Link ideas with small words like 'also', 'but', 'however', 'for example' so the idea run smooth.

content

The essay shows both sides and uses an example (World War II).

analysis

The writer shows a view and ends with a clear line that history matters.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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