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the map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and present.

The map gives detailed information about how Reymouth is developed
at
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now.
Overall
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.
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,
it is clear that
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 there is a dramatic increase in the structure of the Reymouth ,particularly in
development
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the development
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 of golf and restaurants.
Moreover
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, it is
also
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 worth mentioning that
hotel
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hotels
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 remain
less
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largely
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 unchanged over the given period. In 1995,
hotel
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the hotel
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is
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was
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 situated east of
Ryemouth
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the Ryemouth
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 rural area
and
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, and
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hotel
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the hotel
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is
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has
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 not changed
the
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its
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 location at
presenr
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present
. In the year
1995
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1995,
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 was located in
afew
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few
 residential houses
so
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were located so
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 as to inhabit in
given
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give
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 a graph. In both years,
cafe
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the cafe
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 has been on the opposite side of the road where the bottom of
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village
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the village
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. Farmland
was
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apply
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located
in
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on
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 the edge of the
village
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is
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was
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 knocked down to make way for a golf
.
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course.
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 In the east of the Ryemouth
,
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village,village
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village
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 forest park was cut down in order to build
tennis
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a tennis
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.
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court.
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In
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At
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 the bottom of the
village
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is destroyed fishing port
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fishing port is destroyed
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 at present.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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