The diagram below shows the steps in the production of woollen goods

The process presents information about the stages of producing woollen goods.
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, the course consists of several stages starting with shearing and ending with manufacturing a jacket, carpet or knitting the ready-made product.
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with, once the sheep has been sheared, it is sent to the cleaning process , which is done by human workers and through which all bacteria and unnecessary substances are removed . Having been dried, it is spun with a specific machine. After that, the product is made into either a string , which is recycled , or
wool
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.
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this
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,
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is delivered for tufting in order to collect it in one place.
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is followed by ,sending the tufted
wool
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to its own storage where it is kept.
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this
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development, tufted storage of
wool
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is spun to create balls of yarn. In the
last
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part, when there are ready-made balls of yarn, they are delivered for knitting so that scarves are woven , or they are sent to a factory for making jackets or even a carpet.

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