The line graph compares the fast food consumption of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.

The line graph illustrates the
consumption
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of fast
food
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in Great Britain over a
period
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of twenty years
from
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, from
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1970 to 1990
Overall
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,
Fish
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and
chips
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was
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were
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the most consumed fast
food
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,
while
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pizza
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was the least consumed at the beginning of the
period
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.
However
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,
Hamburgers
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experienced significant growth,
whereas
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Fish
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and
Chips
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became the least consumed fast
food
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by the end of the
period
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. In 1970,
Fish
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and
Chips
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was the most dominant meal among
Pizza
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and
Hamburgers
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at around 300 grammes, followed by
Hamburgers
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and
Pizza
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for under 100 grammes each. Over the following years, the
consumption
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of
Hamburgers
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increased sharply and by 1980 and it exceeded the
consumption
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of
Fish
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and
Chips
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at over 200 grammes
,
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. This
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this
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upward trend
was
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continued
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throughout the
period
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. Meanwhile,
Pizza
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recorded significant growth
in1985
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in 1985
and exceeded the
consumption
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of
Fish
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and
Chips
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by the end of the
period
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at
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, at
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the second most popular fast
food
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in Great Britain.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, food, period, fish, chips, pizza, hamburgers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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