You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object.

Dearest friend Ram, Thank you very much for inviting me

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your place, I am truly overwhelmed! Buddy, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I have accidentally bought one of your things in my

bagpack

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backpack

. Before

discusing

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discussing

about

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, I want to extend my heartfelt gratitude. Ram, it was for the first time that I stayed at a friend's house

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I can't express how much I enjoyed your company. The food, video games, music, and everything else

was

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just perfect. Do you remember the speaker

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which

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we were listening to music? In the

afternoon

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afternoon,

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when I was unpacking my things, I

realized

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it's the same speaker. I think when we were cleaning the room, we coincidentally placed it with my clothes

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I bought it here with me. I hope you are not mad, my

firiend

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friend

. Tomorrow, my father is coming for a meeting next to your place

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I will give the speaker to him. I have given your address to him

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he shall deliver it

your

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home around 6:00 p.m. I can't wait for our next meet-up and creating more memories!

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Jan 30, 2026

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structure

Use separate paragraphs for each idea: one for staying with your friend, one for the mistaken object, and one for the plan to return.

grammar

Check spellings and use simple, clear phrases to avoid mistakes.

tone

Keep a polite tone and add a proper close like 'Your friend' or 'Yours sincerely'.

content

Make the return plan clear with a time and way to send the object.

grammar

End each sentence with a full stop and use capitals after a full stop.

tone

Friendly and warm tone that shows gratitude.

content

Clear idea of what happened to the object.

intent

Shows effort to fix the mistake.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

190 words

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