The chart below give the information about the percentage of the adults population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990,2000

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in three different year spans (1980, 1990, 2000).

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, it is evident that all the countries appearing had experienced a striking increase

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the periodic table, with the exception of Japan, which had hardly seen any.

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followed by Australia .

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Japan had the least appealing stats throughout the timeframe. As the regards the obesity levels in Japan, which stood at approximately 2.5 % in 1980

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and 1990. When it comes to 2000, it experienced a tiny growth and reached

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nearly 4 %. In the contrast the USA was the highest competitor in terms of overweight rates, which had accounted for 15 % in 1980, rose to 30 % by doubling up, in 2000.

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looking at Finland and Australia , in 1980 the official

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of both of them was 6 %.

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by the end of the year span the percentage of Finland had almost doubled, in the

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that of Australia had roughly tripled, reaching

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20 %.