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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion

Nowadays, technology has
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a
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 big impact on our daily life and
also
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 our creativity
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, affecting
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affecting
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affected
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from
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by
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 it
everytime
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every time
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. When students research new
information
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, they are not surfing
internet
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the internet
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 anymore. Everyone
use
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uses
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 AI recently.
Therefore
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, people can't see any data
of
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on
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another
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other
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 topics.
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, individuals were studied about learning
new something
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something new
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. I was always
look
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looking
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 at
to
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apply
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books and
google
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Google
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 in my
highschool
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high school
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 times
so
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, so
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,
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apply
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i
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I
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faced many
information
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 about everything
in
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during
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my student process
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. .but
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.but
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But
 AI is a barrier
for
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to
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learning
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the learning
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 process. Why
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this is
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is this
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 too important for our creativity? It has some logical reason:
human
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the human
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 brain
analizes
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analyses
to
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data and
create
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creates
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 something with
them
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it
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. So
without
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, without
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 the
information
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, human's
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human's
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humans'
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 ideas are very limited.
Initially
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, the old generation knows many
job
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jobs
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 because they tried to find
information
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 from life and newspaper
also
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 Google.
On the other hand
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, humanity can access
every
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all the
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information
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 very easily because
internet
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the internet
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 has many resources. The scientists can share their project
to
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with
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public
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the public
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 on the internet so a lot of people can learn everything from the science websites.
These
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This
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information
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are
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is
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 creating a lot of connections
each
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with each
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 other in our brains
and
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, and
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 they are
becaming
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becoming
 ideas.
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, imagine
to
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apply
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one engineering student.
he
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He
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 has
a
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an
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 idea about car engines.
Moreover
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, he wants to make
it
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real his project
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his project real
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.
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However
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 he
don't
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doesn't
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 have any data about
car's
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the car's
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 engine. He can open the phone
and
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, and
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 he can learn everything about cars in 1 second. In conclusion, technology has many advantages and
also
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 many disadvantages in our
lifes
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lives
. Sometimes we can use it for our improvement
and
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, and
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 we can learn many things from it.
but
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But
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 sometimes it makes us too lazy.
Therefore
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, we
dont
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don't
 want to think or wonder
for
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about
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 anything
about
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in
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 life.

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grammar
Use simple, clear sentences. Many mistakes slow reading. Check verb forms and plural s.
structure
Begin with a clear view in the opening and restate it in the final paragraph to show your position.
content
Give one or two clear examples and explain why they support your point.
coherence
Link ideas with simple connectors like 'also', 'but', 'however', and 'then' to guide the reader.
task
The writer shows an effort to discuss both sides of the topic.
content
There are some useful ideas about how tech can help learning.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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