Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a lot of aspects of how
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dress depend on the global clothing
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can happen because, naturally, human
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a social creatures that are easily influenced by others and need to be accepted by their environment.
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, if the vast majority of
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are using the same type of wardrobe, it can lead to the scarcity or even extinction of the unique and diverse cultures of
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in the
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, the one who is selling clothes that suit the trend perfectly
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fast
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brand, which is very non-sustainable.
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, personally, I think global
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trends
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have a more negative impact on the development of cultures and sustainability.
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, in the digital era, the general
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trend is usually influenced by the content and influencers we see on social media. Usually, the type of clothes they’re wearing is from the fast
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brands that are spread all over the
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is why the
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of
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trends
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can be formed.
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,
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can change the perspective of
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about how cool wearing things should look like.
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, the generalism of clothing like
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can gradually lead to the extinction of
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who wear and preserve the original
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culture in each country or area in the
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, the Javanese
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style,
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as wearing “kebaya
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is no longer commonly used by Javanese
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, fast
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companies are very bad at managing the waste products, and they produce a significant number of excess products.
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a more carbon emissions from the unmanaged excessive clothing, which is mostly made from non-biodegradable anorganic materials
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as polyester.
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, they are doing
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continuously because they need to adapt every time the trend changes.
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, a brand called H&M is continuously changing its collection every 1-3 months. And in some articles,
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brand is just throwing up the leftover stock with inappropriate management. In conclusion, global
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trends
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have more adverse effects on both cultural and environmental development. In
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modern
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, it is important to preserve the diversity of cultures in every particular area in the
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and save the earth by reusing something we already have or buying second-hand things, especially for our basic needs,
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as clothes.

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grammar
Check your grammar and spell more. Fix errors like 'human is a social creatures' and 'anorganic' to 'humans are social beings' and 'non-biodegradable' and use plain words from the top 100 words.
structure
Use clear topic sentences to start each paragraph and keep one idea in each paragraph.
lexical
Stick to simple words and simple form. Do not add long hard words that you are not sure of.
content
Give more facts or real proof for your claims and explain how fashion changes life in more detail.
structure
Finish with a short closing line that restates your view and the main idea.
content
The writer shows a clear view that global fashion can hurt culture and the earth.
content
There are examples from real life (kebaya, H&M) to back points.
coherence
The essay uses linking words to guide the reader.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • global
  • fashion
  • clothes
  • dress
  • wear
  • look
  • style
  • brand
  • label
  • shop
  • price
  • money
  • media
  • ads
  • post
  • like
  • world
  • culture
  • express
  • expression
  • culture
  • work
  • jobs
  • earth
  • environment
  • press
  • pressure
  • spend
  • buy
  • design
  • trend
  • brand
  • celeb
  • celebrity
  • internet
  • online
  • shop
  • social
  • media
  • fashion
  • trend
  • idea
  • choice
  • fit
  • color
  • color
  • cloth
  • fabric
  • hand
  • care
  • harm
  • good
  • bad
  • benefit
  • loss
  • balance
  • relation
  • impact
  • effect
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