‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Hello Luy. Did you hear about the local council developing public transport services in our town? I just

come

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across it and couldn't wait to tell you.To be honest, I feel excited since our city will be

been

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one of the central cities.There are not enough buses and trains in our town. I think it would be great if they

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bring more local

transports

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. Let's catch up soon and talk more about it! Best Sug'diyona

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Feb 5, 2026

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grammar

Your note to a friend has many grammar errors. Use the form 'I just found out' instead of 'I just come across'.

structure

Make the flow more clear. Use a simple order: greeting, reason for writing, details, and end with a plan to meet.

style

Try to use just one idea in each short line. This helps the reader to follow your thoughts.

vocabulary

Use the right words. 'Public transport' sounds better than 'local transports'.

punctuation

Put a period at the end of each sentence and put a space after it.

tone

Friendly tone and a clear idea to tell a friend about news.

content

The message is easy to read and shows you care about the friend.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

76 words

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