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Band 3.5

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi Company. In your letter: Give the details of your journey Explain why those papers are important for you Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir I am
the
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apply
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one of the regular customers of your taxi company. I am writing
this
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 letter to apprise you that yesterday
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, 0n
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0n
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on
 5 February
2026
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2026,
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 around 8:10 pm, when your taxi driver picked me up from Walker Lake Plaza , Edmonton , to Beaumont. I forgot my education documents in
taxi
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the taxi
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. Actually, next
monday
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Monday
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 I am going to join a new company for
job
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a job
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 as a deputy manager. I need those important papers at the time of my joining in company, without those
dossier
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documents
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 my joining will not be possible, so I do not want to
loose
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lose
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this
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 opportunity. I would be really
appreciable
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appreciative
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 if you could mail me my expected papers
on
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 my mailing address , which is 1234 54 street , Beaumont. I am looking for your reply. Thanking you in advance for understanding my problem. Yours faithfully Satnam.

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structure
Put one idea in each paragraph. Start with what happened, then why the papers are important, then what you want the manager to do.
language
Use short, simple words. Do not use hard or long words.
accuracy
Check the date, time, and place. Make sure they match and are easy to read.
format
End with your full name and how to reach you.
tone
Polite tone
content
Clear request for help
content
Gives key trip details
format
Good close
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • journey
  • details
  • important
  • papers
  • manager
  • taxi
  • documents
  • work
  • personal
  • need
  • identify
  • suggest
  • help
  • check
  • driver
  • company
  • drop-off
  • pickup
  • problem
  • deadline
  • situation
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