You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Samantha, I hope you are doing well. I would like to share with you some good news, I recently bought a new house

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Saint Laurent

road

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. It was my dream

from

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for

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a very long time to purchase an apartment at

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location.

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this

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, I was searching for

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place which

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would

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be near my work, and

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is only 4

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away from my workplace.

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, the house has

great

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interior designed by professional designers. It has 4 bedrooms, a kitchen, 3 bathrooms and a grand common living space. I would appreciate it if you could come and visit my new place. I will be extremely happy to be your host.

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, I would like to go

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shopping with you. I have made a long list of decoration items, and I admire your expertise in

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area. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Give my regards to your parents! With regards, Jay Bansal

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task response

Add the date of move or a short line about how life will be with the move to show the task is fully done.

coherence

Break ideas into more clear parts by using a new paragraph for each main point and add linking words.

grammar

Check small grammar fixes (minutes, near my work, cleaner phrasing) to improve accuracy.

content

Clear reason for moving is stated.

tone

Friend-like tone and invitation are clear.

content

New house details are described with good specifics.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter • explain why you have moved • describe the new house • invite your friend to come and visit

some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. some people think individuals are more and more independent. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?