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Introduction
The table and line chart
illustrates
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illustrate
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 the daily average
minutes
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,
Punctuation problem
apply
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 spent on
activities
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 by
men
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 and
women
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, which is related to free
time
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 and households in a country by the year of 2008.
Body paragraph 1
Overall
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, it can be seen that
,
Punctuation problem
apply
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men
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 spent
most
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more
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time
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on
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apply
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entertaining
Correct pronoun usage
themselves by
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by
Change preposition
with
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 digital media and playing than
women
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. But
on the other hand
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, in
rest
Correct article usage
the rest
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 of the
activities
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women
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are spent
Wrong verb form
spend
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 more
time
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 than their opposite gender.
Body paragraph 2
In 2008, both
men
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 and
women
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use
Verb problem
spent
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 most of
the
Correct pronoun usage
their
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time
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 in digital media,
average
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averaging
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 137 & 118
minutes
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 per
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, respectively. The second highest
time
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 spent on
activities
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 for preparing food
which
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, which
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 is almost 25
minutes
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 per
day
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 for
men
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 and 78
minutes
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 for
women
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.
Furthermore
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, for washing and ironing cloth
items
Punctuation problem
items,
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men
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 spent almost 20
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 less than
women
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 per
day
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.
Conclusion
In
activities
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,
such
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 as sport, reading and repair
both
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, both
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men
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 and
women
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 spent less than 20
minutes
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in
Change preposition
on
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 average per
day
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.
Moreover
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, in buying something,
women
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 are ahead
almost
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by almost
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 10
minutes
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average
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apply
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per
day
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 than
men
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.

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structure
Make a clear start and a clear end. Use one short paragraph for the intro and one for the end.
coherence
Use short, easy lines to tell what the chart shows. Do not mix many ideas in one line.
data-description
Compare the data with simple words. Put the most important fact first, then give numbers.
grammar
Check the small grammar and form. Use 'spend' in past good with 'spent' where needed.
data-use
You give many data points from the chart to back up the idea.
overview
You start with an overall view, which helps readers.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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