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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Support your answer with examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Introduction
nowaday we have
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a strongher
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strongher
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stronger
 cooperating relationship between different
country
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countries
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english
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be
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as
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 an international official language
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also
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be
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debated by
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the loss
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 variety
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apply
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culture
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Body
the
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 main reason for a single working language is more and more
internation
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international
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phenemanen
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phenomenon
shift
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community
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community's
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 need
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for example
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, most
company
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companies
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 set up a global chain when they have a conference
with
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english
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 would be more
converence
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convenient
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use
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using
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different
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a different
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langauge
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language
.
it
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is because they can clearly
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explain
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 their idea and
understady
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understand
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view
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views
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 without translation.
Anther
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 reason is different
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culture
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cultural
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backgroun
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backgrounds
employer
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apply
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have
small
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limited
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option
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 to find a job without they are weeker language
speeker
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Conclusion
in
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oppesity
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opposite
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set
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setting
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 up a single
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langauge
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language
 would be a restriction of the local community
culture
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 developed.
Image
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 that some people ,
their
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whose
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culture
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cultural
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langauge
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language
are
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 not
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a commen
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commen
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common language
langauge
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and
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apply
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they
be
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are
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 encouraged to study
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english
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 in
oder
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order
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high-pay
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high-paying
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 job, they
world
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would
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 take more time to
stady
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study
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english
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English
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 than their original
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langauge
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language
.
in
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this
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tern
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term
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, some
weekened
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weekend language
langauge
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be
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loss
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lose
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 their motivation and
loss
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lose
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 their
identify
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identity
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 for their community.

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task
Plan your answer before you write. Start with a short intro, then two body parts that give equal talk on both sides, and end with your own view.
task
coherence
grammar
content
Some care to talk about both sides.
structure
Effort to discuss the topic.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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