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You recently visited a local restaurant, but your experience was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Explain when you visited the restaurant •Describe what went wrong during your visit •Say what you would like the restaurant to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report my dissatisfaction with my
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 visit to your restaurant. My friends and I visited your restaurant for dinner on 5th February 2026 to celebrate one of my
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birthday
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. We were seated at the table We ordered chicken biryani and some drinks. Food was served cold and was not edible. We reported it to one of the staff and requested to swap
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 food.
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However
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 our complaint was ignored
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 the workers refused to replace the food on the table. I do believe feedback is necessary for any business to grow and succeed. I
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 agree that every employee and owner should be able to accept
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constructive feedback.
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 , I greatly recommend
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educate the staff on how to accept compliments and constructive criticism. I hope to have some warm and spicy biryani next time I visit the restaurant Yours faithfully, John Doe

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structure
Put each idea in its own paragraph. Start with when you went, then what went wrong, then what you want.
style
Some sentences are long. Use short, clear lines.
content
Be precise about what you want next, for example a refund or free meal.
tone
Keep a polite tone; avoid extra ideas about feedback unless needed.
structure
Formal greeting and closing are used.
content
Date and event are given to show why you write.
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