The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process involved in the production of
electricity
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, from preparing coal to
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generating
electricity
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Overall
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,it is evident that the procedure is sequential, following two main stages, beginning with burning the coal and ending with generating
electricity
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Initially
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, the coal is delivered to industry by a large van. Next,coal and oxygen are sent together in a furnace , which removes CO2, Mercury, and Sulfur. After that, the furnace produces slag , which is transformed into a Gas turbine. The
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striking stage is that Purified syngas arrives at the gas turbine and generates
electricity
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, steam is heated by the exhaust gases through heat recovery
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however
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, it filters out the flue gases to produce the final product.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraction
  • preparation plant
  • impurities
  • conveyor belt
  • turbine
  • generator
  • high-pressure steam
  • boiler
  • cooling tower
  • emissions
  • environmental impact
  • scrubbers
  • closed-loop system
  • condenser
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