The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the earth.

The illustration presents the
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cycle
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in nature.
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, the
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has several stages during which the
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from
seas
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,
rivers
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, and trees evaporates and forms
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. After these
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cool down, they create rain, and as
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,
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gets back into the soil, and the underground
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returns to
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and
seas
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. The
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starts with the heat from the sun causing the
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from
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, lakes, and
seas
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to transform into vapour. These vapours,
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the transpiration from plants and trees, form
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that are transported by wind and cooled down. After cooling, the
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produce rain, and as
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, the
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is returned to the soil. Groundwater
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flows back into
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or lakes and
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, which in turn
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end up in
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. After the
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is stored, the
cycle
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begins again.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, cycle, seas, rivers, clouds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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