The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. -> The line graph compares the urban populations of four countries between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2024.

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the proportion

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of the

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in four different Asian nations (

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Phlippine

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Philippines

, Malaysia, Thailand and

Indonesia

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) living in cities

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between

1970 and 2020 and some

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from 2030 to 2040.

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, the urban populations saw

consdierable

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considerable

upward trends in all four Asian cities

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Malaysia started

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as the second-largest

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nation

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in

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but

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over the years became the dominant city in the group,

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Indonesia

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, despite starting as the lowest city, showed the most significant rate of growth by the end of the

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.

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1970, the

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rate of Malaysia started at 30%,

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rose sharply in the next two years

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it suddenly

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increased

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dramatically

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it

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until 2040 at nearly 88%. with

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Philippines'

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population

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climbed slowly at 32% in 1980,

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there

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fluctuations in the three next decades at almost 40%.

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, it

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recovered

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predicted

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continue

to rise until 2040 at 55%.

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both cities (Thailand and

Indonesia

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) showed a steady but increasing trend, with

Indonesia

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rose

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sharply until it

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Thailand in 2000 and

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is predcted

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predcted

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predicted

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around 66% in 2040.