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Nowadays, the quality of education is very low. Some people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers; others believe that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times, there has been a debacle
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 the quality of education. Some citizens believe that criticism from
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 their
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 should be encouraged,
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 others think that
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 should not be tolerated as it would promote an unhealthy study environment. I will elucidate both views and give my opinion in
this
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 essay. On the one hand, it is imperative to note that as
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 we are susceptible to errors and passing the wrong information
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, the same can be for
teachers
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 in schools. As an illustration, during a
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 a teacher can pass the wrong information to
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 an outdated source or a lack of better
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 is detrimental to their level of knowledge.
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,
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 can be one major reason to encourage criticism from
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.
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,
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 can lead to a disruptive
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 in most cases.
On the other hand
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, the support of these criticisms by
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 can ultimately affect the learning process in the class. By so doing, it interrupts the
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teachers
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 lectures, which in turn can lead to a distraction to the other
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 in the
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, it
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 a negative effect on the self-confidence of
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, especially if they may be wrong
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 the information shared. More so, it creates room for
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 to misbehave in
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 by always challenging whatever topic the teacher is discussing.
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, it does not promote a learning environment
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 because it encourages the student to feel superior to their
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 should not be the order in the
classroom
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. In conclusion, for a properly functional learning environment, the teacher should be respected in the
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 would be greatly limited if
students
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 are encouraged to
critize
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criticise
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.
Hence
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, I am against the notion.

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planning
Plan what you want to say. Make a short plan before you write. Use a simple order: introduction, two body paragraphs with one main idea each, and a short ending.
format
focus
Keep to one clear point per paragraph and use simple words. Make your view clear and stick to it.
content
There is a clear angle and a view against the idea.
structure
Intro and ending exist and the essay tries to talk about both sides.
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