The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The grouped bar chart gives information about the
number
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of houses built yearly in the cities of Derby and Nottingham between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
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, it is seen that the
number
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of houses built in Derby increased over time,
while
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it fluctuated in Nottingham.
Also
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, both cities experienced the highest home
construction
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in 2009. In Derby, the yearly
construction
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of
homes
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was less than 50 in the year 2000, it began to slowly
increase
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and peaked at around 120
homes
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in 2003.
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quantity was stable until 2007, after which there was a significant
increase
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. Annual
construction
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of
homes
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was about 280, and had risen to almost 350 in 2009. Nottingham,
in contrast
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, had a significant
increase
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and decrease in the
number
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of home
construction
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. In the year 2000, it was at 50 residences yearly, and it climbed slightly to approximately 60 in 2001. Afterwards, it reduced to around 20
homes
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in 2002, and began to
increase
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steadily to about 70 houses in 2005.
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figure fluctuated heavily afterwards with fewer than 10
homes
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in 2006, almost 200 in 2007, an estimated 5 in 2008, and the highest
number
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of 250 in 2009.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, construction, homes, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • bar
  • year
  • years
  • period
  • city
  • Derby
  • Nottingham
  • number
  • houses
  • built
  • go up
  • rise
  • go down
  • fall
  • higher
  • lower
  • more
  • less
  • same
  • different
  • overall
  • generally
  • in general
  • in contrast
  • whereas
  • while
  • during
  • from
  • to
  • between
  • the chart shows
  • it shows
  • notable
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • comparison
  • data
  • report
  • paragraph
  • sentence
  • linking words
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