The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided graph depicts data collected in Dubai throughout 2002, pertaining to the sales of gold.
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, the transactions experienced fluctuation within the year, peaking at the start of the year, followed by a gradual decline, and
finally
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stabilising
at the end
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of the period. At the beginning, sales experienced a rapid increase, going from 200
million
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Dirhanas to 350
million
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in a span of two months, which turned out to be its highest point in the shown report. From
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point on, from March to July, revenues significantly plummeted, reporting slightly over 100
million
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in sales, which was almost two times lower than the amount stated at the start of the year.
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, for one
month
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statistics jumped to around 200;
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,
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trend was repeated with a decline, reverting to the state from two months earlier.
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, for the remaining months, revenue has risen to a stagnant point of around 200
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million
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that
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which
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continued until December.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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