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The given line chart depicts the number of students who studied in universities abroad from 3 countries The US The UK and Australia over a period of 5 years from 2002 through 2007.

The line graph illustrates how many
colleges
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students
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 studied in universities abroad
form
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from
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 three different countries (The US,
The
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the
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 UK and Australia) between 2002
abd
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and
 2007.
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, what stands out from the graph is that there was a considerable fall
over
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trend
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the trend
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 in the students from
The
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the
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 UK,
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 the rate of Australia was
simlar
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similar
 and remained stable
,
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. Similarly
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similarly
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,
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the
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 US was
levlled
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levelled
of
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off
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 with some fluctuations. In 2002, the students
of
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in
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The
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the
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 US started at just under 50000
and
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, and
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 it
decreaed
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decreased
 gradually in 2004
at
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to
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 nearly 45000
student
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students
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,
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then
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the
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The
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the
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 US
line climbed
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increased
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 slowly again until
reached
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it reached
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to
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apply
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50000
the
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over the
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 next three years. If we look
in
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at
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 the
Australia
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Australian
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 colleges, the trend was similar from the beginning until the end of
period
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the period
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 at 10000
college
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colleges
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.
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,
The
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 UK line stood at 30000
colloeg
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colleagues
 in 2002, at which point it levelled
of
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 until 2003,
then
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 the rate went down steadily till 2007 and reached
to
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almost 24000.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • increase
  • increased
  • increasing
  • rise
  • rose
  • rising
  • grow
  • grew
  • growing
  • up
  • fall
  • fell
  • falling
  • decrease
  • decreased
  • decreasing
  • down
  • upward
  • plateau
  • stable
  • stable
  • trend
  • trends
  • number
  • numbers
  • students
  • US
  • UK
  • Australia
  • country
  • countries
  • paraphrase
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overall
  • year
  • years
  • period
  • describe
  • show
  • patterns
  • growth
  • change
  • year-by-year
  • gradually
  • suddenly
  • significant
  • notable
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