A problem has occurred on the road outside your house. Write a letter to the local councilor. In your letter -Introduce yourself -Explain the problem - -State what action you would like him to take

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about a sewage pipe leakage on 3rd Street East, which is causing several problems for local residents. My name is Nagender Kanwar, and I reside at 207, 3rd Street East. I have been living here since July 2017, and I am currently employed at the Regent Hotel. Since yesterday, residents have been experiencing a strong and unpleasant odour. Upon inspection, we discovered that a sewage pipe
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burst, resulting in foul smells and wet, slippery conditions on the road.
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, some residents are unable to access their vehicles
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a large pool of contaminated water. I would be grateful if you could arrange for a plumber and a cleaning crew to address
this
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issue at
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earliest convenience. The situation is serious and may worsen if it is not resolved promptly. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Nagender Kanwar

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task response
State your exact ask at the end, and add a date or time for action.
coherence and cohesion
Keep each paragraph about one idea and use simple link words to show order.
greeting and closing
Keep the greeting and closing neat and polite.
vocabulary
Use simple words; some terms in the letter are not basic (for example 'reside' or 'earliest convenience').
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Clear aim and polite tone.
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Intro with name and address.
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Problem is well described and shows impact.
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Action is asked: to send workers to fix the issue.
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