The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts

reveals

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reveal

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the daily intake proportion of three specific nutrients,

sodium

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, saturated fats, and added

sugar

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consumed by an average individual in the USA, during every meal and snacks. Units are measured in percentages.

Overall

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, it is evident that

highest

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the highest

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proportion of

nutrient

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nutrients

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is taken daily during dinner and

subsequently

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at lunch.

Whereas

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apply

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sugar

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is mostly consumed

while

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having snacks. During breakfast, both saturated fat and added

sugar

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are consumed 16%, a little over than

sodium

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which

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, which

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is 14%.

Conversely

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while

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lunch

Verb problem

having lunch

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sodium

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and saturated fats are taken at 29% and 26% respectively, but there is a dramatic fall in

sugar

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consumption

which

Punctuation problem

, which

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constitutes only 19%.

While

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having snacks, a large amount of added

sugar

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is eaten.

This

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accounts for 42%,

whereas

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apply

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only half the proportion of saturated fat is consumed,

besides

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apply

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14% of

sodium

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. Meanwhile, during

dinner

Punctuation problem

dinner,

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a large percentage of

sodium

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is taken,

that is

Linking Words

43%, alongside saturated fat and added

sugar

Use synonyms

comprising

Punctuation problem

, comprising

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Change preposition

apply

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37% and 23% respectively.

abrpriya

Feb 14, 2026

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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162 words

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