The line graph shows the percentage of spending in a European country from 1960 to 2000.

The line graph illustrates the expenditure ratio for a European country from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
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, the share of spending dropped over the years, except for Transport, which experienced a considerable increase.
Food
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accounted for the highest division of spending in 1960, after which it declined steadily. In 1960,
Food
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was a major expense, accounting for 34%, but it fell by approximately 8% in the 1980s. Leisure was the second-largest category of expenditure, accounting for 18%; it was comparable to bread, which declined by 4% in 1980. Clothing accounted for 10%, followed by Transport at 8%, which rose to 12-13%,
whereas
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clothing decreased by 3 %. Fuel/Energy was either spent (5 per cent) or remained the same, decreasing by only 1%. From 1980 to 2000,
food
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declined by 8%.
However
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, transport increased from 12 to 15%, until it overtook
food
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as the largest share of expenditure. Leisure and Clothing experienced a dramatic decrease, with percentages of 12% and 5% in 2000. Fuel/Energy remained the smallest share of investment throughout the trend, decreasing to 2% in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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