The first graph below shows the number of train passengers in the city of Sydney (Australia) between 1995 and 2004. The second graph shows the target for trains to run on time compared to the percentage reaching this target.

The first line
graph
Use synonyms
illustrates the total number of people travelling on the train in Sydney from 1995 to 2004. The second
graph
Use synonyms
shows the
percentage
Use synonyms
of trains arriving at their destination on time.
Overall
Linking Words
, in the first
graph
Use synonyms
, people travelling in the train experienced a gradual increase with a minor downward trend over the past few years. In the second
graph
Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
of trains running on time was shown to have considerably decreased with minor fluctuations. At the beginning of the period number of people stood at 250 in 1995. It
then
Linking Words
increased gradually until 280 in 2000 before reaching a peak of 300 in 2001. After rising moderately , it experienced a significant decline to again 280 in 2001, and
then
Linking Words
continued to decrease slightly until just under 280 in 2004 Turning to the second
graph
Use synonyms
, we can see the
percentage
Use synonyms
of train punctuality began aroun 92 % in 1995 and changed over the 8 years with minor variation, but it returned to its initial level in 2003.
However
Linking Words
, the
percentage
Use synonyms
of reaching the target dropped rapidly to just over 70 in 2004

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: