The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart provides key information about the share of desktop browsers in 2019
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2021, the units are measured in proportion .
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
Chrome
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and Safari are
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the highest after
Chrome
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,Firefox i norice is getting lower from 2019 to 2021.
According to
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what is shown
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Chrome
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, Chrome
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in 2019 had 69% but in 2021 got 67
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, which
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shows by lower from before. When we see
safari
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the safari
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, there is an improvement in 2021 than
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in 2019
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by one point. Edge
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in 5% but in 2021 had 9% I notice a great improvement from 2019. In terms of Firefox , in 2019 it had 9% but in 2021 it had 8% which means it got lower than 2019 but not a big difference
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When we talk about others
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got less in 2021 than in 2019 by two points. I think
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on the lea

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words chrome with synonyms.
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