The table show the results of surveys in a European country, carried out in three different years. Percentage of respondents expressing interest in certain sports.

The table illustrates the total proportion of interests in sports by collecting data in European
country
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, which occurred in 1999, 2004 and 2009.
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, over the years, sports have become increasingly popular rather than going down.
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, in European
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, the most popular sport was football
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the results of the survey , and the smallest attention was given to the golf category The main attention was given to football sport in the survey with 57 %, but it was only in 1999 and over the following years it is percentage fell, and in the
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year of the survey, it was 48%.
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, the golf section increasingly grew; it was 8 % in the first review , but in the end it rose by 9%. The volleyball section
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rose sharply. The proportion of the swimming section was the same in 2004 and 2009, with 34%
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the yoga category , but only in 1999 and 2004, with 10 %.
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, the basketball fans were not having big changes but only decreasing by 1% every year.
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,
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basketball decreased, the interest in the tennis field went up , and the proportion in the
last
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review was 33%.

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