Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. IELTS 14
Nowadays
money is
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our life.
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at school should
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how to deal with money to avoid
and save money for
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.I strongly agree with
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deeper
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we should
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of
and the role of parents
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reasons is
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Plan the essay with four parts: introduction, 2 or 3 body parts, and a short conclusion.
Make a plan before you write. Say what you want to show in each part.
Use simple and clear sentence start; check the verbs and the form.
Fix spell off words and wrong words. Use 'money' not 'mamage', 'essential' not 'essintial'.
Give one clear idea per paragraph; end with a line that sums up.
Add an example from life to show your point.
Idea is clear that money is a big thing in life.
The plan uses two main ideas.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general