The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on

food

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and

drink

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, restaurant and hotel, and

entertainement

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entertainment

among five different age groups of residents from under 30 to

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uper

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over

70 in the UK in 2004.

Overall

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food

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and

drink

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increased throughout the age groups and ranked

frist

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first

in people who aged

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uper

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over

70,

whereas

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the category of restaurant and

hotle

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hotel

was decreased over the ages,

particulary

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particularly

individuals who aged between 61-75.

However

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food

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and

drink

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and

entertainement

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entertainment

were more popular among people who

aged

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were aged

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between 61-75. With regard to the

food

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and

drink

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, it stood at around 6%

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among

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aged

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those aged

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under 30,

then

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rose gradually throughout the ages,

peacking

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peaking

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among

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aged

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those aged

show examples

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uper

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apply

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76 with about 24%. Turning to the restaurant and hotel, it was the highest proportion

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initially

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initially,

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approximately at 14% in

aged

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those aged

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under 30, before declining

dramatecially

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dramatically

until

aged

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those aged

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between 61-75

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apply

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accounted for 2%.

This

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was followed by a significant fall to around 7% in

aged

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those aged

show examples

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uper

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apply

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76.

Finally

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, the figure for

entertainement

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entertainment

stood at 6%

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among

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aged

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those aged

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under 30, which was followed by a sharp growth to 22%

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among

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aged

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those aged

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between 61-75, and

then

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it decreased markedly to 13%

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among

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aged

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those aged

show examples

Use synonyms

uper

Correct your spelling

over

70.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink, uper with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Expenditure
Categories
Age groups
Residents
Summarize
Main features
Comparisons
Trends
Patterns
Spending habits
Life stages
Childcare costs
Healthcare costs
Outliers
Economic factors
Social factors
Cultural factors
Leisure activities
Financial outlays
Demographics
Percentage
Allocation of funds
Consumption
Discretionary spending
Essential expenses
Generational differences
Income bracket

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