Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: • apologise for damaging the item of clothing • explain how it became damaged • say what you will do to fix the problem You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...

Dear Maria, if you

are

Verb problem

apply

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remember

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remember,

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I have taken your dress for my prom. And I have

some

Correct determiner usage

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problem with it. I want to apologise. When I tried to close it on my

back

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back,

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heared

Correct your spelling

heard

a strange sound, and when I

put

Verb problem

turned

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off

Punctuation problem

off,

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I understood that I

broke

Wrong verb form

had broken

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it. I do not

how

Verb problem

know how

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apply

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happened. So, I think that you should know that. Sorry Maria, I think that I should

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apply

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give you some money, can you tell me how much

this

Linking Words

dress

cost

Fix the agreement mistake

costs

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Also

Linking Words

, I can go to the

women

Fix the agreement mistake

woman

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how

Correct word choice

who

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can fix it.

However

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, I want to say that I can do it quickly. In the end, I will do everything possible for the best results. If you want to get your money back, tell me about that.

In addition

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, I hope that you understand me

as well as

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you can. I can not wait to see your answer. Lots of love, your Evgeniya

acaitaz

Feb 23, 2026

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coherence

Put apology, how it broke, and fix plan in clear, separate parts so the reader can follow.

grammar

Use simple, right words. Fix small errors like 'heard' and 'know' to be correct.

content

Be clear about money and how you will fix the dress. State the amount or a plan.

tone

Keep a warm tone but not too long. End with a simple closing.

tone

The letter keeps a warm tone and shows care.

content

It says sorry and what you will do to fix.

structure

There is a greeting and a closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

159 words

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