The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

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Japan's

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in 1960

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, over the period shown, Japan’s population has been ageing, with the number of elderly people increasing,

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the proportion of children has declined.

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population were high,

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years, the number of working-age people grew for a certain period but later experienced a decline. In 2000,

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2040, the elderly are predicted to constitute the largest age group,

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the proportion of children is expected to decline steadily. Sevinch

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The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?

Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.