The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information regarding water cycles in forested
as well as
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urban environments, generally illustrating both similarities and differences between the two areas. Noticeably, the cycle begins in the same way in both environments, with precipitation
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affects the land below it. One of the main aspects to take into account is the level of pollution, which heavily impacts
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natural phenomenon.
While
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the soil in the forested
area
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is permeable, the high levels of concrete and man-made constructions in the urban
area
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reduce the span of permeable soil considerably.
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, the infiltration in the
urbanized
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environment is reduced.
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, every aspect of the cycle is largely influenced by the lack of natural drainage in the urban
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.
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in the
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forest,
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the conditions are optimal for evaporation and transpiration
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, which
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benefit the climate, these aspects are reduced in the urban
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.
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, the resulting runoff in the urban
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is polluted, as opposed to the runoff in the forest.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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