A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Dear Mark, Thank you for agreeing to look after my home and dog during my time away. I want you to know that you don't have to hesitate in using the house as your own and enjoy your time there
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if any urgent situation may arise that you think I have to know
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about,
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then
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you can contact me at +971245364764. Since
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you know that I had to leave "red" - my dog there, I should aware you about taking care of him. He needs to be walked around the park at least once per day
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he gets his zoomies and might get cranky. You can feed him the food I have left on the kitchen counter
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up to three times and no more.
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taking care of
red
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the red
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, would you be able to make sure that the plants are watered? The ones in the garden need daily watering
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while
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the ones
indoor
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need to be watered once a week.
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, for security, please clear the
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and leave the porch lights on at night. Thank you once again
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I hope to meet you when I come back. Lots of love, Alex

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structure
Make one idea in one paragraph. Put each idea in its own paragraph.
format
Use greeting and closing on their own lines and simple words.
grammar
Fix small grammar errors and use short, clear sentences.
content
Describe steps clearly for pet care, plants, and mail in order.
tone
Keep a warm, friendly tone, and avoid too much loose talk.
tone
Friendly tone to a friend.
content
Clear plan for dog care and plant care.
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Contact details are given.
format
The letter has a clear start and end.
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