The chart shows the types of communication training taken by employees in aninternational company and the reasons why they took part in this training.

The pie chart illustrates a breakdown of the proportion of different kinds of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons
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they participated
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, part-time training(evening) accounted for the largest portion,
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the proportions for intensive training and distant
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were comparatively small. Meanwhile, most employees chose to take part in the communication training because of their holiday travel. In detail, part-time training(evening) made up a substantial 39% among all types of training
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which was approximately eight times larger than the smallest part, distant
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(5%). Followed closely by two kinds that occupied the same proportion, part-time training(weekends) and self-tuition
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standing at 22%. The percentage of intensive training was slightly lower, at 12%.
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, holiday travel was the main reason, taking up the largest
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46%, which was twice as much as the second largest sector, business travel(17%).
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, the minimum reason was observed in communication with clients, at 10%. The figures for other reasons and
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, representing respectively at 13% and 14%.

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