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Band 4.5

As computers translate quickly and accurately, some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that any
language
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 can be translated by computers.
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, it is an argued issue whether individuals should spend time
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learning a second
langauge
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language
 or not.
Although
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technology
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 is quite fast to translate
language
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, I believe that learning foreign languages cannot only help to understand other
countries
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countries'
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 culture but
also
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their tradition
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tradition
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traditions
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.
To begin
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 with, with the advent of new
technology
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, residents can translate their own
language
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to
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 another within a few minutes. Advanced translation applications,
such
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 as AI-powered tools and
ChatGpt
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, provide instant text and voice translation, enabling people to communicate with other
nations' people
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nations
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immedately
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immediately
.
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, Google
Translator
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 has become a popular application around the globe. So without learning a
language
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, they can visit any country and communicate with locals.
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, residents think that learning
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language
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 is no longer essential.
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,
technology
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 is not always reliable because it can sometimes mislead people, providing inaccurate
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information
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.
On the other hand
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, I contend that without learning the local
language
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, individuals cannot appreciate the value of other nations' cultures and traditions.
This
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 is because
language
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 is connected with
cutural
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cultural
 identity and social values. Unlike
technology
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, human communication involves expressions, emotions, and gestures
while
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 speaking, which is crucial for achieving a deep and meaningful understanding. To illustrate,
leaning
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learning
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 English enables immigrants to socialise with locals and
participates
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 in festivals, namely Christmas.
To conclude
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, even though learning
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language
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a language
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 is
waste
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a waste
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 of time
due to
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advancement
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advancements
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 in
technology
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, I strongly assert that it is mandatory for learning
culture
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the culture
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 and
tradition
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traditions
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 of other countries in depth.

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task response
State a clear view at once. In the first paragraph, tell if you agree or disagree and keep that view to be clear all through the writing.
grammar vocabulary
Use only simple words. Check spelling and form. For example learning, immediately, cultural, not 'cutural' or 'leaning'.
coherence
Put words that join ideas in the right place. Use a new paragraph for a new idea. This helps flow.
content
Give a real two or three strong ideas. Tie each idea to a short example that fits the point you make.
strength
Clear position is shown.
strength
The essay looks at both sides.
strength
Some good use of real examples from tech.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Machine translation
  • Nuance
  • Bilingualism
  • Cognitive development
  • Global job market
  • Cross-cultural
  • Technological dependence
  • Language proficiency
  • Cultural identity
  • Authentic interactions
  • National security
  • Linguistic subtleties
  • Cultural references
  • Emotional undertones
  • Cognitive exercise
  • Mental agility
  • Travel experiences
  • Accuracy in translation
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