The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph illustrates how
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Britain
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Britain's
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usage of 3 different types of fast food has changed in 20 years.
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it is clear that
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pizza decreased in the 1990s,
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hamburger and fish&chips went up
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of the period. In 1970 damage of hamburgers was less than 100
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, but 10 years later product reached 100
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At the end
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of the period destruction of burgers increased to 300
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. At the beginning of the period, fish&chips were about 90
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. In 1980, there were more consumers, and the indicators had grown by more than half of 200. 5 years later , as
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rate continued to 300 , and in 1990, consumption of fish&chips reached 500
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, showing the highest results.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rise
  • grow
  • increase
  • go up
  • climb
  • steady
  • sharp
  • rise steadily
  • fall
  • decrease
  • drop
  • remain
  • stay
  • level off
  • peak
  • high
  • low
  • be higher than
  • be lower than
  • in the end
  • at the start
  • over the period
  • by 1990
  • from 1970 to 1990
  • more than
  • less than
  • compare
  • contrast
  • the most
  • the least
  • overall
  • during the period
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