today,the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not real needs of the society in witch they are sold. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

The modern world is the era of marketing. More and more companies are starting to pay attention to

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fancy advertisements. But

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can we, consumers, rely on and trust them? Despite

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fact

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that commercials are important, consumer goods organisations must pay attention to what they really bring

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the table. The society nowadays is

highly-demanding

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. We can see on the internet shopping platforms

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that millions of useless goods are presented day by day. When the customer looks at them, it makes them get excited

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consequently

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they end up making impulsive purchases.

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is very concerning, since we can see a lot of people getting into

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, and not being able to afford their vital needs first. I totally agree with the fact

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that

requirements of the

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society do not meet the types of goods companies have to offer. Marketplaces,

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reflect

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phenomenon at its best. I, personally,

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tons of experiences

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situation

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. Whenever

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enter the marketplaces, searching for needy

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items,

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tend to get disappointed

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when

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cannot find what

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want.

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,

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get distracted and buy lots of fun yet useless things. In conclusion, the gigantic market companies should consider

satisfiying

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satisfying

the essential needs of

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humans first. In the era of

economical

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economic

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stability

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and

technology

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breakthroughs, people must not worry about their real needs

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, how and where to buy them.