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Some people believe that artificial intelligence (AI) has the power to improve our lives. However, others are worried that it could have a negative impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Introduction
Many
indivisual
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individuals
 think that advanced technology has
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an empact
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empact
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impact
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stander
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standards
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 of our
life
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.
However
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other
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, it often
said
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say
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 that it will make a huge issue
on
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in
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envirement
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environment
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the
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The
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straightforward
,
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an argument
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and
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made against
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the idea
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This
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esay
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essay
 will discuss the concluding view.
Body · 1
On the one hand,
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there
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 are a lot of people
prefer
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who prefer
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use
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to use
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 AI in their
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life
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lives
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. For
manily
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many
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reasons
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reason
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reason,
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is
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it
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increase
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increases
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producative
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productivity
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make
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makes
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life
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easer
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easier
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For example
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,
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it
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debug
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find
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error
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errors
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 in the
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moment
. In
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addition
,
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it has
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 become
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crucial
 is use in several
industry
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industries
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such
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 as Education.
Body · 2
On the other hand
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, the
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majority
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consider
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considers
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about
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apply
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their jobs.
they
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They
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are
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belive
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believe
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if
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that if
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coming
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comes
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a human
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human
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human,
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is
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it
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 will
lost
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lose
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 jobs. As
result
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a result
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, AI works without
selary
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salary
 and 24h during all
week
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every week
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Conclusion
In conclusion, it seems advisable
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that thet
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thet
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the
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ultimitaly
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ultimately
 AI will
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come
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 with strong
intalgent
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intelligence
. In my view,
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we
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 should use AI
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to aligne
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aligne
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align
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life
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 because
many
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of many
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benifit
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benefits
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Firstly
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,
incarese
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increase
producavet
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production
 and rapid development
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apply
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task response
State both sides clearly and give your own view in one clear sentence at the end.
structure
Use a plan: intro, two body paragraphs, then a short conclusion. Each part has one idea.
grammar
Check spelling and grammar. Use short, simple sentences.
vocabulary
Keep easy words only and fix common use errors.
content
You try to cover both sides of the topic.
content
You give a short end view.
content
You name ideas like work and learning.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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