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The table below gives information about the percentage of land covered by forest in various countries in 1990 and 2005, with estimated figures for 2015.

The table chart provides data about the proportion of forest
teritory
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territory
 in diverse states in 1990 and 2005
separetly
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separately
, with
forecast
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a forecast
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 for 2015.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that
Brazil
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 has the most forests
in
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at
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 all
given
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apply
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time
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times
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. Another striking feature is that only Chile and New Zealand illustrated an upward trend. Looking at the details, as regards Australia and
Brazil
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, they
demostrated
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demonstrated
 a marginal reduction.
For instance
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, in 1990
Brazil
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 accounted for 62,2 per
cent
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, after that, it witnessed a decline to 57,2 and probably 53,5 per
cent
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 in subsequent years.
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, Australia
has
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had
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 21,9
initially
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, but showed the same pattern as
Brazil
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, and in 2005 and 2015 made up 21,3 and a mere 20 per
cent
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 respectively.
By contrast
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, when it comes to Chile and New Zealand, it went in the
oppposite
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opposite
 direction. At the beginning, New Zealand
has
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had
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 28,8
percent
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per cent
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, but it experienced an increase to 31 and around 32,2 per
cent
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 as
prognosis
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a prognosis
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.
Nevertheless
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, in
1990
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1990,
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has
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it had
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 around 20,4 and 21,5
percent
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per cent
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 in 2005.
On the other hand
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, it has approximately 22 per
cent
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 as
prediction
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a prediction
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brazil, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deforestation
  • Afforestation
  • Reforestation
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Conservation
  • Sustainable development
  • Deforestation rate
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic growth
  • Land use
  • Climate change
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Natural resources
  • Forest conservation policies
  • Barren land
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Renewable resources
  • Ecological footprint
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