You are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plan Explain why you want to get a part time job Suggest how your frined could help you find a job.

Dear Aman, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to give you
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got a visa 2 years study visa for
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was wondering if you could help me
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find
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over there . I know you have a hectic schedule at your workplace, but you are the only one
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will be there for my
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classes will be from
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9am to 2PM EST.
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will have workshops where we do practices under
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of our
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am free.
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I will have classes on weekdays
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can work on weekends . As you
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am on my own after graduation
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apart from my family
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want to take my own
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what you can do for me ,
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will share my resume with you in PDF form
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get
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any
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of love rishav

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coherence cohesion
Write one clear main idea in each part.
coherence cohesion
Use easy link words like and, but, so, because.
task achievement
Ask for help in a more clear way at the end.
task achievement
Keep the tone warm and friendly all through the letter.
task achievement
You gave all three parts from the task.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear start and end.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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