Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I think it is very important to keep our rooms tidy. I have two reasons.

First,

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a tidy room makes us happy and feel calm.

Second,

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we can find things easily.

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, when I have homework that I need to do early, if my room is tidy, I can start it at once. For these reasons, I think it is very important to keep our rooms tidy.

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Write more to fully answer the task. Your essay is very short, so your ideas do not grow enough.

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Add one more clear reason and explain each reason with a bit more detail.

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Use a fuller example from your life or work, not only one short case about homework.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay has a clear start, middle, and end, but the body is too small.

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Link your ideas with simple words like also, because, so, and for example.

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Make each main point its own short part and support it before you move to the next point.

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Your opinion is clear from the start.

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You give two main reasons that match the topic.

coherence and cohesion

Your ideas are easy to follow.

coherence and cohesion

You use a basic example to support one point.

Fully explain your ideas

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

68 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

organised
clutter-free
productivity
mental clarity
efficiency
professionalism
first impressions
ergonomics
aesthetically pleasing
compulsive neatness
functional space
minimising distractions
systematic arrangement
time management
work-life balance
streamline
feng shui
optimal performance

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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