The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.

The line graph
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illustrates
information about
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the proportion
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of the labour force
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across
different industries from 1930 to 2010. As an
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trend,
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the percentage of people who engaged in farming, fishing and
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forestry
declined, the figure for technical, industrial, and sales and office sectors increased steadily over the
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. Another striking
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feature
is that
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the rate
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of other services remained almost the same during the
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. In detail, despite the fact that
industrial and
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industry
was not popular among
labour
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the labour
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force from 1930 to 1960, it followed a sharp upward trend, rising about 35% by the end of the
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.
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, technical
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sales and office increased gradually, reaching 30% and 20%, respectively.
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, in 1930,
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80% of employees were more likely to work in farming, fishing and
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forestry
, there was a steady decline of the labour force reaching just above 0 in 2010. During the same
period
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, other services experienced a fluctuation between 0% and 20%.

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