The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map displays the
comparation
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comparison
of three potential sites for the development of a superstore in Pellington City.
Overall
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,
first
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the first
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location (A) is planned to be erected in the city centre, primarily in the housing zone,
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the
two others
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other two
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(B and C) are built in the
outskirt
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outskirts
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.
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the spatial diagram, the initial proposed block is located in the residential area, near the traffic-free zone and a railway curving from the south to the east, which is able to connect the urban and
suburb's
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suburban
customers to the market. Representing that
this
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site is most likely
attract
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a varied
buyers
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group of buyers
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. Occupying the rural space in the north-east part, the second place,
by comparison
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, is estimated to serve only the villagers. Meanwhile, the remaining site will be built on the southern edge of the metro, serving mainly
for
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the suburb's residents. Since it place is
also
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close to the industrial zone and
connecting
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connected
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to the
crowds
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city
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centre by the railway, it is possible to bring the workers and the city's residents as well.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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