The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts provide key information about Little Chalfont Library. The units are measured in percentages and other statistical measurements.
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, it is clear from the bar chart that the number of loans from 2007 to 2016 has had a steady increase.
In addition
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, the highest number was in 2016 with almost 23,000,
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the lowest total number of loans was in 2007 with nearly 15,000.
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what is shown in the pie chart, the largest age group members of the library were
adults
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aged from 18 - 64,
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followed by children, with only 22%, which is less than half of
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percentage. For both young
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aged from 13 to 17, and
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over 65, they make almost a quarter of the pie. In terms of the table of total loans by category in 2016, the highest are both children’s factions and adult factions with 38%, individually. The lowest category was children's DVDs, with only 1 per cent.

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